Friday, 23 May 2014

The Avengers writing group

Going for a walk
I hear the chirping sound of a cricket as I walk through the forest.
 I feel the breeze pinching at my cheeks.
 I taste the lemon from the leaves; it leaves a bitter feeling in my mouth.
I smell autumn coming from the moisture escaping from the dead leaves.
I see the sun rising up, flashing through the forest.

By Lose

Autumn Leaves
I can hear the leaves crunching and screaming as I stomp on them.
My body is covered in goose bumps until the sun glares down on me.
I can taste the smell of fresh moss that’s growing on the trees.
I can see the ground covered in old brown leaves, it reminds me of my warm fuzzy blanket I just want to pull it over me.

By Losana

5 senses
The suns blanket of heat covers the forest and all that’s in it.
I hear the sweet sounds of the colourful birds in the slightly damp tree.
I taste the fresh water from the stream as the breeze brushes against my face.
I look to my left and I see a person, I get a fright as I think I am alone… it was just a shadow of a tree. Phewww!!!!
By Rhea

Autumn had just arrived
I see the leaves falling like raindrops on a stormy day.
I smell the most beautiful scent that no one could ever describe fresh plants…fresh everything.
I taste the mud as if it is in my mouth running down my throat.
I hear the wind rushing past my ear, it sounds like a tornado ripping past me.
I feel the sun as it beams down on me, breaking through the trees.
It makes me think that its summer again.
By Dorothy
This is one of the pictures we used for inspiration.

4 comments:

  1. What beautiful examples of writing! I was able to create an image of your topics as I was reading your writing, thank you for sharing your work.

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  2. Wow! These poems are very detailed, and descriptive!! Congratulations room 10 on inspiring all of us to write magnificently. Great pieces of writing that you can all be proud of. WELL DONE!
    Room 4

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  3. nice work girl's keep it up :)

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  4. amazing[:
    isaiah rm17

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